83. My secret formula for flash fiction

I’ve been writing Friday Fictioneers, hundred-word stories, for three quarters of a year now. That adds up to 40 stories, each of which has been peer-assessed. I wondered what I could learn from analysing those assessments. Which tales garnered the greatest response and what was distinct about them?

The number of people reading varies each week, depending on season, and whether there’s a public holiday. So totalling the reads doesn’t tell you much.  The average number of reads was just under 91 per story, ranging from 123 for last week’s offering to 40 for my first one.

There is a better way of understanding which stories resonated. I calculated the proportion of likes and comments per read, and then analysing the narrative characteristics.  Eight stood out as garnering above-average likes and comments – After the Asteroid, Lovers, Parting, The Cellist, Leaving, Mud, The Fury, and The Curtain.

A spoonful of medicine helps the sugar go down


Of these eight “winners”, four were sad – almost half of all the sad stories I’ve written. By contrast, only one of the eight was sweet – 16% of the sweet stories.  So tragedy wins.  “Sadly beautiful” was a comment on After the Asteroid, which deals with dementia and which received the highest ratio of comments and likes to views.


Relationships are essential


These “winners” also included half my stories about lovers, and a fifth of those about family. No surprise there – relationships are central to a good tale.  Of Parting, one commentator wrote, “’Some moments are so perfect they deserve to be protected from life’s corrosion.’ Oh, what a lovely line! Something to live by.”



Violence was also a key feature. It occurred in three of the eight “winners” (half my stories that contain violence). The Cellist (see below) features the survivor of an atrocity. One reader said “This is wonderful, sometimes I think that music played from pain is even more beautiful.”

Art or artists


Stories featuring art or artists made up only a tenth of my output, but half of them were among the “winners”. That may reflect the fact that many of the readers are other writers. One reader of the story Abstract, which was not among the “winners”, reflected this, writing “Clever analogy of what we try to do with 100-word stories.”

Story elements that lose


Story themes that did not feature strongly or attracted below-average likes and comments included politics and philosophy, science fiction and fantasy, and travel. That surprised me, since these are major genres. Perhaps I just don’t write them that well, though I like to think I do.

Combination works


A hundred words is not much. Yet the analysis shows the importance of complexity. Six of my stories included three or more elements. Of these, four were in the group of “winners”. The Cellist combines violence, art, sadness and transcendence. Of the 16 stories with just a single element, only one, The Fury, a horror story, featured among the “winners.”


The secret formula

So if you want to write a successful flash story, combine sadness, violence, relationships and art. But maybe only if you’re me. Your winning formula may be different.


9 thoughts on “83. My secret formula for flash fiction

    1. Interesting question, Paula. I’m not sure any of them are novel-worthy premises. Flash fiction really only deals with one idea. Though, as you know, I’ve worked scenes from a novel in progress as flash fiction, and I’m working up one flash story into a longer story


  1. Dear Neil,

    What you’ve done here is very interesting. It’s never occurred to me to analyze my flash fictions and figure out which were the most popular. I do have quite a few I consider my favorites. I do remember your cellist piece since it was also the week I generated a bit of controversy with my own piece. I’m not a big sci-fi writer although I love the genre. If I come up with one it’s quite by accident.
    We do tend to write what we’re most comfortable with. For me it’s historical fiction, but flash fiction is a great exercise and gives us a chance to experiment.

    As I’ve told you before, most weeks (not all) I can predict with 85% accuracy where most will go with the prompt. I can say, that you aren’t part of that herd. For that I thank you. I enjoyed this bit of analysis.



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  2. Interesting read. I also love my stats and analysing, so this really appealed to me. It’s true that happy endings don’t always win out over tragedy. Maybe because bittersweet endings are more like real life. What may be throwing off your stats is that many of your readers may be other writers. A point you picked up. It might be different from the general population’s reading preferences.

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  3. Nice to meet you – I’ve jist discovered your blog. I love writing, but I’ve had most success with non-fiction. I’m trying my hand at flash fiction, as a starting point, and taking part in various blog challenges. I thought your post on a Secret Formulas for writing flash fiction was very good.


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