201. Tropes in Literature

You’re reading a book and you feel you already know this hero, or you’re certain that the girl and the dark brooding gentleman will get together. This common experience is to do with genre conventions and tropes. Tropes define genres.

The Call to Action in adventure stories, the Second Chance in romance stories, the Locked Room Murder in detective stories, or the Showdown in Westerns are all examples of such tropes. They tell the reader what to expect of the story. In other words, they’re bound up with the conventions of genres.

Differing definitions of tropes

What is a trope? Like most things in the writing game, there is no agreed usage of the concept.

Definitions fall into two broad classes:

These two definitions descend respectively from the Latin tropus (figure of speech) and the Greek tropos (a turn, direction, way; fashion, manner).

I’m not going to spend more time on the first group of definitions. A metaphor, for example, is a trope in this sense, and “figure of speech” tells us perfectly clearly what kind of literary device it is without resorting to “trope”.

The second category is more interesting. Tropes are a kind of shorthand that help the reader understand characters, situations and conflicts without extensive exposition. In short, tropes define genres.

Tropes perform various functions

  • Provide familiar story elements, offering well-trodden paths that help the reader locate what kind of world they’re in.
  • Reflect and evoke cultural values and assumptions. An author may use them to reinforce or to critique those values.
  • Anticipate outcomes and resolutions. Once in the grip of a trope the reader expects the story will unfold in defined ways. For example, if the story is a romance, it will end with a HEA (Happy Ever After) or a HFN (Happy for Now)

Examples of tropes in this sense include (an entertaining list can be found in The Ultimate Book Tropes List: 60+ Tropes in Literature:

Romance

  • Enemies to Lovers
  • Second Chance
  • The Love Triangle

Fantasy

  • The Chosen One
  • The Call to Acton
  • The Quest

YA

  • Found Family
  • First Love
  • The Underdog

Mystery

  • The Locked Room Mystery
  • The Country House Murder
  • The Amateur Sleuth

Science Fiction

  • Alien Invasion
  • Tech vs Nature
  • The Mad Scientist

Tropes and surprise

Surprise is, of course, a necessary part of reading pleasure. If  things turn out exactly as we expect (apart from, perhaps in the romance genre) we are disappointed. So  the writer must use tropes with care and creativity. The reader in a particular genre expects the story to contain the genre’s defining elements. The author’s skill comes in twisting those conventions in unexpected directions. An overused trope becomes a cliché, with no power to surprise. Arguably, this happened with the vogue for vampire fantasy romance  stories pioneered by Stephanie Meyer’s Twilight series in the 2000s.

You can also, more dangerously, use tropes to set up genre expectations and then flip them. Here’s an example of one of my flash fictions pieces that does so.

Squinting into the sun, I moved the cheroot to the corner of my mouth, chomping down. I shrugged back the poncho, and my fingers flickered by my thigh. The stranger stood tall and unmoving, waiting for me to make my move. Everything went slow, and the train’s hoot at the station offered a mournful chorus to the folks fleeing town. A silky baritone sang “Oh don’t forsake me, oh my darlin’.”

A knowing smile flickered across the stranger’s face. He recognised the game we were playing. Perhaps he too had just been dumped. I hurried onto the platform.

The opening has all the tropes of a Western and references the film High Noon. But the final paragraph flips this as we realise it’s the narrator’s fantasy created to cope with being dumped by a lover.

Tropes and motifs

Tropes recur and are generally understood within a culture as  symbolising a cluster of meanings.

Motifs also recur. If they are specific to the symbol system of one author or text they can only be understood through discovering their meaning in the text. An example here would be the green light in Fitzgerald’s Great Gatsby. But many motifs are widely shared within a culture. An example would be the red rose of love. Are these, then, tropes?

They may reinforce tropes (for example, the tall dark stranger is quite likely to turn out to be the love interest in a romance). But they are not tropes. A motif is a specific symbol not a full narrative signposting.

Friday Fictioneers – Stem Cell Therapy

PHOTO PROMPT © C.E. Ayr

This doesn’t feel right. Not my hands—they’re grasping strongly. Not my legs—they’re kicking up dust. Yes, I’m youthful again. My heart is strong. But me, I’m wrong. I’m not me. Then who is thinking this? We are. Me and this stranger in my head.

The stem cells have worked, just like the doc said they did in the mice. And the fog of confusion is gone. But I’m not me anymore. These are my stem cells. This is my brain—younger, better, stronger.

But why do I want to jump on that hog and speed away?

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – First humans at the galactic biology conference

PHOTO PROMPT © James Pyles

We’re astonished by your biological science. You’ve achieved much and understood little. The mechanics, yes, you grip that, but not what life is. Probably, you absorb it as “red in tooth and claw” because each of you are alone in your bodies, in a struggle of each against all.

So, you don’t taste the obvious—community. Evolution stopped for you at the extraordinary community of cells that is a body. Yet examples of the next stage are all around you: lichens, bees, forests, ecosystems. Life cooperates. But your drive to see only individuals is strong. 

Welcome to the galaxy.

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – Us

PHOTO PROMPT © Lily

This thing is Not Us—the taste is wrong. We punch holes in it and inject toxins. The surrounding muscle cells are also Us, so we leave them alone. We surge on, always alert for the tang of Difference.

What is the Usness of Us? This is important so we don’t make mistakes. The neurons might know—that’s their job. It’s not something we’re programmed to concern ourselves with. Yet, still, there’s order to it all. Maybe even meaning.

Perhaps there’s something bigger of which we’re a part.

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – Storyline

PHOTO PROMPT © Lori Wilson

I must be in a story. The narrative drive is obvious—the call to adventure, the first plot point, and the second. Who’s writing me? Do I have any say in it? I mean, for instance, couldn’t we make this a romance instead of an actioner? Begone, wizards and elves! Bring on the girls.

It’s lovely to be the hero, though. Thanks, I appreciate that. Not a bit player.

Oi! What’s this? Losing my job wasn’t very heroic. Do your scriptwriters even know what they’re doing?

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – The Answer

PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox

“Esteemed colleagues, we have a problem: data centres consume vast quantities of energy. allow me to demonstrate the answer.”

A hush fell like snow on the room.

He continued, “I give you Cerebronic.”

A bank of lights flicked on behind him.

“Cerebronic is biological. We built it of nerve cells instead of energy-hungry microchips. The thing runs on thirty watts—our contribution to solving the climate crisis.”

The lights flashed on and off in a seemingly patterned way.

One audience member shouted. “That’s Morse code. I think it read, ‘Welcome to the next crisis’.”

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – The Question

PHOTO PROMPT © Fleur Lind

Powdered light sleets through the drab garden, each photon fluorescing on my retina. Rough brick blocks the path, and the rubble of all my yesterdays litters the flowerbed. Some have taken root, slick tendrils already clutching for the sky, dragging themselves upwards to sprout monstrous fruit.

I must pass through. I cannot. The gateway will not yield without a key. The gate is the answer. But answers are useless without the matching question.  

Slumping, I pick one of the bloated fruits and gnaw.

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – Whodunnit in 100 words

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

Mustard, Plum or White? Which of them entered and left a locked room? Mustard is not who he claims—no Colonel he. But a murderer? Likewise, White is trying to conceal her liaison with Plum, but perhaps only out of delicacy.

Let’s consider our assumptions, mes amis . Well, since the murderer could not have got out, they did not do so. They were still in the room when the body was discovered, escaping when the chambermaid set up the hue and cry. And that means the killer is Mustard, because Plum and White were seen together at the time.

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Friday Fictioneers – Live Stream

PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

There’s a guy at the next table live-streaming his dinner. WTF? You’re supposed to eat it, you moron, not film it. I’m going to go over and call him out. Whaddyamean what for? For being an grade-A idiot, of course. Nothing’s real anymore, nothing is simple pleasure. Everything has to be shared now before they know they’re having fun.

No! Get your hands off me. I’m going to ram one of those skewers where the sun don’t shine.

Now more idiots are filming the fight, making memories. And here come the cops.

Bet I make the ten o’clock news.   

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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

200. App on review : ProWritingAid’s Chapter Critique

I’ve previously commented on ProWritingAid’s Manuscript Analysis, which left me underwhelmed. The same is not true of their Chapter Critique, which showed a level of “insight” I had not expected from AI. I tried it out on my current project, The Dictator’s Wife. This novel deals with the gradual transformation of Ava Arslan, wife of the dictator of Carpathia, from a moderniser into a tyrant.

Chapter Critique will analyse up to 6,000 words—in this case, the first six chapters. It provides feedback on a number of areas, particularly:
• Tension & Pacing
• The Protagonist’s Arc
• Pacing & Flow
• Language & Style
• Characters
• Dialogue

It “understood” my intent. Here’s a flavour of how it worked.

  1. Did the machine “understand” the story?
    The report highlighted the principal element of the first chapters, particularly the protagonist’s motivation for agency and legacy. Under the heading What’s Working Well, it noted, “The … most prominent element is Ava’s sophisticated navigation of soft power. She demonstrates an ability to manage her husband’s insecurities and the country’s patriarchal structures to carve out her own agency. This establishes the complexity of her character, providing a foundation for her role as a modernizing force within a traditionalist regime.”
  2. Did the machine “understand” other key elements of the writing?
    Among other things, it noted “Ava’s sophisticated narrative voice” and spotted that subtext in the interaction between Ava and the powerful and dangerous Ramus—”a masterclass in soft power and social ‘minuet.’”
  3. Did the machine detect problems?
    Praise is, of course, nice, even from a machine. But the test of whether it’s useful is its ability to spot problems. The report noted seven problems in total. All were reasonable, and two were particularly helpful.
    • The analysis highlighted the episodic nature of the chapters, saying this “prevents the reader from settling into the immediate tension of a specific moment, making the transition from ‘accidental First Lady’ to ‘political strategist’ feel rushed. The story moves quickly through time, often summarizing events (like the village tours) rather than dwelling in them.” More than this, it suggested two possible fixes: either “what if one of these time jumps was bridged by a recurring sensory detail or a continuous thread of conversation?”; or extending the scene.
    • The analysis noted that the voices of Ava and her collaborator, Elena, were nearly identical.
  4. These diagnoses were as acute as I might have expected from a professional editor. I’m impressed.