
Eyes watering with strain Brother Eadfrith bent over the parchment, retracing in ink the silverpoint outlines. His back ached. Late afternoon light slanting low through the casement cast a shadow, and he shifted the sheet of vellum on the oak desk.
With delicate brush, he applied the ochre border and then crimson for the saint’s robes and animal’s coats. Finally, he laid gold leaf onto the capitals. The sun touched the page, and beauty clasped the text. Lines of fire connected hidden meaning that sparked from image to sentence, from intricately scribed knot to ornate capital – earth, ladder, heaven.
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Oh my goodness, your descriptions are magic! I felt that delicate gold leaf going on the page and the sun reflecting upon it. Gorgeous words 🙂
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Thanks, Jessie
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That jumped up and grabbed my senses. Could almost smell the ink and catch the shadows reflected from the gold leaf. Charming and very descriptive.
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Thanks Graham, I’m glad you liked it
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Alive with colour and texture. Very well done.
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Thanks, Sandra
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This is so beautiful Neil! Really good job.
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Thanks so much
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Dear Neil,
This was a feast for the senses. I could see everything vividly. Beautifully written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much for the praise, Rochelle
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Full of beautiful images, just right for the prompt.
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Thanks so much, Michael
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Lovely tale. Really nicely told.
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Thanks so much
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Lovely atmosphere, I could hear the silence around the monastery and taste the atmosphere. Well done.
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Thanks, Iain
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The description of illumination reads like poetry… art and artisan coming together.
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Thanks, Bjorn
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Neil, I do believe this is one of your best. It tingled the senses. Thank you.
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Wow! Thanks, Alicia
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Wow this is breathtaking Neil! I found myself captivated as I took in the rich description. Very nice work.
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Thanks so much Joe, you’ve made my day
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So glad to hear that.
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beautiful words paint an impressive picture
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Thanks so much
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That was beautifully descriptive, Neil. I could practically smell the inks and paints.
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Not the crimson, I hope. It was made from crushed beetles
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Euwww… not the crimson ! 😉
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Beautiful descriptions. I could see and feel everything!
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Thanks, Clare
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Some lush phrases in here. Could picture the words coming to life and off the page.
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Thanks , Paul
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I wonder if Michelangelo felt that way. Beautiful wording. Very captivating story. Well done Mr. Neil 🙂
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Thanks so much
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Wooooooooow! Vivid descriptions, Neil. Very inspired, I can tell. I have always been a fan of those types of art that use the first letter in the text and have pictures in them. That’s what i imagined, anyway.
Five out of five monk’s haircuts.
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you imagined right.Thanks William
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😉
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I could just see you with a monk haircut, Kent. Ha! Maybe you should wear one to the next OWL meeting.
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‘Late afternoon light slanting low ‘ Thank-you and… ‘Lines of fire connected hidden meaning’ thank-you. So visual I have no other words.
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Thanks so much
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This one took me right to the Abby, Neil… wonderful!
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Thanks, Dawn
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Beautiful story, beautifully told!
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Thanks, Jan
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Exquisite environment, I could hear the hush around the cloister and taste the air. Well done…Very pleasant work…
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I love illuminated manuscripts and you conveyed the art in 100 beautiful words.
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I’m glad it resonated
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Made me feel I was in those special places I’ve been to see such manuscripts.
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A lovely and vivid image.
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Thanks so much
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That’s wonderful Neil – such a rich image of a lost era. Those parchments muct have looked magical to people, mustn’t they? Lovely stuff
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There was certainly a lot of technology and a lot of love that went into their making
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Astonishing feats of technique and beauty. I always love the bizarre pictures some of the scribes included in the margins – monkeys and rabbits and numerous other animals behaving in very odd ways!
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It was such an art wasn’t it, and one had to dedicate their life to it because I took so long! I don’t have the patience and I’m a writer!! Ha ha
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And if you made a mistake you had to junk the whole page
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I agree with all, it was wonderfully descriptive. My back aches just reading about his toils.
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Thanks so much
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I’m imaging the Book of Kells. Another work of writing art from you today.
Tracey
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Yes, I was thinking of Lindisfarne, where the Book of Kells was produced. Thanks, Tracey
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Wonderful!
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Thanks so much, Sascha
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That brought me back to my trip to Germany when I visited the Andechs Monastary.
Thank you for that.
It was a good trip.
– Lisa
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I’m glad it took you there
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Beautifully written with such careful and catching description. The piece really pulls you in with the work this skilled artisan and monk of long ago is creating on the page.
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Thanks so much
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Love the imagery!
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Thanks Ashley
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I was holding my breath, afraid his hand would slip!
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Thanks, Liz
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Reading that wonderful description made me feel so calm and at peace. I just so love illuminations — the colours, the detail, the thought of how much concentrated work and patience went into producing it. In fact, the whole idea of monastic living fascinates me. I have a particular love of plainchant — listening to it, and singing it.
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Thanks so much, Sarah
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My favorite Friday Fictioneer author.. I look forward to your stories each week. You never let me down!
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That is so lovely. Thank you
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Very beautiful. The meditative, faithful, painstaking work is described so vividly.
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Thanks so much
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Hours of tedious work on those parchments. What a labor of love. Superbly written, Neil.
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Thanks so much Rusell
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You’ve created a painting with words. A superbly written masterpiece.
Isadora 😎
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Lovely descriptions, worthy of the work and diligence that went into those texts
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Thanks so mucj, Michael
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The scene you painted, such intense devotion, gives meaning to the idea of Life to Word.
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Thanks, Honie
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Excellent descriptive writing Neil
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Thanks so much
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Marvelous description, Neil. I could see the monk sitting at his work with the rays of the sun streaming in. Grand writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks so much, Susan
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A great depiction of this wonderful art and all the layers of meaning it holds. This was a joy to read, Neil.
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Thanks so much Siobhan
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Such a beautifully crafted testimony to the scribes that also made me think of the magic of Kabbalah. You can feel the power and magic of words in this.
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Thank you so much
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This is stunningly beautiful writing Neil. Really evocative.
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Thanks so much, Thom
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Sorry time slowing, narration time lengthening, just as it would to do such exacting work. Inspirational. The monk’s work and yours, my f…. fellow writer.
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Obviously you’re not mine but yours.
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