
“Why are the houses on stilts?” I asked.
“Rains a lot here,” my guide replied. “The stilts raise us above the water level,”
Though I thought this was really clever, I wondered why they didn’t just make the houses float.
“They’d drift away,” she said.
“Would that be so bad? You could travel without leaving home., take your home with you,”
“What a lovely idea.”
For a year I didn’t return. When I did, the stilts were gone and a cloud of houses drifted serenely across the sky under multi-coloured balloons.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
Now that’s floating away!
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Isn’t it though!
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Dear Neil,
A lovely idea until it storms. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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What a lovely image.
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Thanks so much, Iain
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Nice visual. The animated movie Up came to mind, though that was just one house…
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Thanks so much, trent
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Idea put to great use 🙂
Multicoloured balloons with houses!
What a brilliant sight for all!
Hope balloons are sturdy enough to withstand atmospheric disturbances.
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Thanks so much, Anita
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A smiler, Neil. Lovely picture 🙂
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Thanks so much, Linda
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Neil you elevated this story very nicely 😉
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I see what you did there
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A fanciful and delightful idea.
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Thak so much, James
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Excellent, Neil. I enjoyed where you took your story.
It made me think of the song, “Come Sail Away” by Styx. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Bill
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Fantastic! I love the concept of ingenuity that knows no bounds! What a lovely picture those floating houses are!
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Thnks so much
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I liked that movie. Saw it a few months ago at the preschool I was working at. Good lessons in it. 🙂
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Which movie is that?
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“Up” I think is the title… a house floats up on balloons. There’s an old man… deals with issues around aging. Just googled… it’s Disney Pixar “UP”
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Oh! now I want to do that! Great take.
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Thanks so much, Alicia
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Lovely story, but the polar bears would have a field
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Thanks so much, Michael
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Floating serenely sounds lovely. Nice!
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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I love the imagery of your story; it’s very vivid.
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Thanks so much, Penny
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That’s pretty cool imagery. Lovely story.
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Thanks so much, fleur
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That would have made Dorothy’s travels easier. Who needs a tornado?
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It’s not the getting there it’s the journey, they say
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Oh now that’s clever! Flying floating homes… certainly avoids flood waters!
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Patent pending
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This is what happens when you don’t clarify requirements. He meant floating on water and they interpreted it as floating on air. I see it all the time in IT 🙂
Lovely writing as always.
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Thanks so much,
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Love this! What an unique take on the image! Beautifully done 🙂
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*a
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Thanks so much
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Thinking about the movie UP but a whole village and thinking yes I would love to live somewhere like that!
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Suggest it maybe, to yor local authority
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Lovely adorable take.
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Thanks so much
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