
We call it The Event. The moment when everything changed, when we lost writing. Ink refused to lock onto paper, and just drifted in the air like dark fog. Neither quill nor printing press could force the binding. Every time we opened a book, the letters sprang from the page and roosted in the rafters. Servers were wiped clean
I believe I’ve found the solution. Listen.
“Once upon a midnight dreary
While I pondered weak and weary….”
We will remember and recite.
Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
So imaginative. Writing takes its revenge for all the horrors perpetrated in its name. 🙂 Sign me up for a full rendition of ‘To Be or Not to Be’ and ‘When You Are Old’ by Yeats.
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Great. Can you recite any plumbing manuals?
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The day the ebooks won!
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Nope. Sorry. All the servers are wiped
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Ah! Missed that little bit of information. Back to recital class then.
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Good to recite – needs must if the words won’t stick to the paper any more. Ink refusing to lock and letters roosting in the rafters – poetic. Bare servers terrifying! And I love the aside about the plumbing manual.
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Thanks, Jilly, At least it will bring familes together again around the freside
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An interesting reflection on the prompt. It provokes the idea how the ghosts of the past are always present, but no one is listening. In today’s technological age the servers, and internet, are as ubiquitous as the air we breath – what horror if there should be a five minute outage. (Ask the TSB customers – their lives are ruined- so they say).
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Thanks, James. Interesting reflection
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Dear Neil,
May it never happen…nevermore! Chillingly imaginative piece. I like the solution, though.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. If it happened we might have other problems too, Something would have gone wrong with gravity
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Ah, the immortal Poe to the rescue—the first of many, I imagine, depending on how many people have memorized worthwhile writing 🙂
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Let’s hope someone memorised how the sewage treatment plant works
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🙂
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Yes, they have.
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As I recall, this was the ending of the 1966 film adaptation of Ray Bradbury’s novel “Fahrenheit 451.”
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I’ve never read it, but I’m aghast at the idea I’ve stolen a story
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I doubt you’ve stolen it. Such things are bound to occur from time to time. It was the film’s answer to books being illegal to possess and read, and also to preserving their contents by making each person a living book.
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I’ll do my part by reciting Where the Wild Things Are. I like the implication that listening is the cure. Back to the old ways of storytelling…
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Exactly
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I think it was Jim Morrison who said that poets will become more valuable after the apocalypse because nobody can memorize a novel. Good one.
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Thanks, Joshua. I may take up poetry
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I’d better start learning a few novels just in case. Nice one Niel.
My FriFic tale is called Solace!
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Or maybe the schematics for a power station
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I like this one—made me think of Fahrenheit 451.
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Thanks, Jane. I promise I didn’t steal the story
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It’s what they used to do in the days before ordinary people had access to books yet it terrifies us having to revert to actually learning stories if we want to pass them on. As for pinching the story, don’t they say that Homer has already told them all already?
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A whole new sort of nightmare I had never imagined before! I have a terrible memory for recitals like this, I fear I will be lost in this new world!
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Hire a boy
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Do they cost much?
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Less than a man
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Neil, this was fantastic. Well thought out, and that sort of thing I’ll describe as “realist imagination” where the imagination seems very real.
I wrote a series of letters to dead artists for the A-Z Challenge and was researching Leonardo Da Vinci last week. Obviously, he was such a genius none of us can ever hope to get to the bottom of him, but I was researching about the Renaissance and cramming my brain full of context in a very short space of time. I knew about the Middle Ages and an overview of the Renaissance, but I read this wonderful fact that the knowledge of the Greeks and Romans was lost to Western Europe for 1000 years. That I believe, was largely due to the control of the Church. I then spoke to my husband who works in IT, and he spoke about how books are being uploaded into the cloud etc and loads of people are throwing away books, if they’re even buying them in the first place. I am a book hoarder so I figure I’ll be right as long as your premonitions don’t come about!
Here’s a link to my post: https://beyondtheflow.wordpress.com/2018/04/26/v-leonardo-da-vinci-letters-to-dead-artists-a-z-challenge/
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Thanks so much, Rowena
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Such an imaginative take on the prompt Neil. Love that idea of words flying off the page into the air, refusing to be trapped on the paper. Lovely
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Thanks Lynn. It was triggered by reading an article on what would happen without gravity
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Oh, yes! I can see that. Interesting how news influences our stories!
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I steal shamelessly from wherever I can
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A fascinating idea – very visual
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Fabulously imaginative – loved this!
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Thanks so much, Susan
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Thank goodness my parents asked me to memorize a poem for little extras I wanted. Horseback riding lessons ~ memorize a poem. Fencing ~ guess what? Dance lessons ~ you got it, a poem. I think I’d do well in this world.
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You will be praised with great praises
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😉
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Fascinating idea. Reminds me of the Book People from Fahrenheit 451.
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Thanks so much
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I loved the magical imagery! What a spooky and horrible dystopian vision you’ve conjured — losing centuries of writing, only retaining the few things that people could remember and pass down as oral traditions. It would be the dark ages all over again! ((shiver))
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Thanks, Joy
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I had a vision of “Roots”, when he went to Africa and was told the story of his ancestors, or rather the list of each descendant…
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I like that association
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Do glad you did.
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What a novel idea!
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Thanks Dawn
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Very imaginative. A great story.
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Thanks, Lisa
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So imaginative. India has a long tradition of oral retelling of history, so we’ll survive I guess 🙂
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India and Africa will lead this world out of its dark age
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What a horrific vision. The end of civilisation as we know it. As you quite rightly point out in the comments, even moderately advanced technology like a sewage treatment plant depends upon the written word (although constructing and operating a basic unit could be done, but you wouldn’t be able to advance from that).
My take on this at first reading was that it made a rather good allegory for Alt-News and the post-truth era. If words become so debased that we could no longer trust them at all, they might as well not be written. We would then become reliant on the echo chamber of our friends – an oral tradition of daily news if you like – and we would only be able to interpret what we learned about current affairs through the lens of our own experience.
Super story, Neil. Well done!
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What an interesting interpretation of the story. Thanks for that Penny
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Reminds me a bit of Fahrenheit 451 which is one of my favorite books. Good story!
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Thanks, Renee. Other people have made that association, though in fact I’ve never read the book
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You HAVE to! It’ll make you appreciate your story even more.
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Brilliant! Where DO you get your lovely ideas, and so quickly, too?
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I keep a stable of out-of-work Christmas elves. Thanks, Liz
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What a horrible world it would be without the written word! One would hope we could continue to tell the stories like they did in days of old before the printed word. Well done! 🙂
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Thanks, Courtney. Yes, a writer’s nightmare
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A true horror story in my mind!
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But at least publc story tellers will thrive
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Very true!
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Loved this story, what about paintings, or Viking runes.
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Thanks, Mike. They’re gone too
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Fascinating! Floored by your imaginative take.
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Thanks so much, Dahlia
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Loved it. I love the image you’ve painted of the words jumping off the pages. Lets hope we are capable of remembering and reciting by the time this happens.
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Thanks, Irene. We should start practicing now
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Clever! Like it
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Thanks, Bettina
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Going back to traditional or ancient story-telling ways. Before the pen or widespread literacy. Interesting to think it could happen again under such circumstances.
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But how many have memorised anything?
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Your letters roosting in the rafters had me smiling, Neil
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Thanks, Kelvin. It tickled me too
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“insert the toilet plunger in the bowl and thrust the handle up and down vigorously. If it does remove the clog after three tries, cry ‘Oh Shit!'”
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That’s how sewage treatment plants work?
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So cute – Tsk Tsk! Even the ink didn’t want it – Funny story I’m impressed!
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Thanks, Nan. I’m glad you liked it
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Oh the horror of losing writing! Very imaginative.
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Thanks, Clare. But the joy of recovering narration
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The Fahrenheit 451 film is also pretty good, just as an aside since I also made the association.
What can we do to coax these naughty letters roosting in the trees back on the page? Maybe value them more? Or maybe this is our hour, the flash fiction story tellers. We’re so full of ideas, we just sit down and tell our stories. Sewage treatment… plumbing… that can be reinvented. The poetry and literature through the ages… thankfully we have the microfiches in the salt mines… no paper to jump from, no servers to be wiped. 😉
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They didn’t tell me about the microfiches in the salt mjnes. I;ll get to them directly
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Back to the days of oral storytellers. Wow, very creative! I have to say it would a sad day. I love my books. =)
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Thanks, Brenda. I can promise it won’t really happen (almost)
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Whew! =)
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How would we cope if we had nothing to read, or were unable to write? This is truly a horrific imagining and brought to mind this post to preserve books: https://charlesfrenchonwordsreadingandwriting.wordpress.com/2018/05/05/an-invitation-to-join-the-uls-the-underground-library-society/
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Thanks, Sarah Ann
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Lately I’ve heard people talking about reading “real” books, as if ebooks weren’t “real.” But your story makes me think of how stories originated, around the campfires, sharing tales. Those weren’t the “real” books that people go on about, but they were real stories, shared and handed down. Revered.
I love the playfulness of the letters roosting in rafters.
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Sometimes realism escapes me. But yes, underneath the whimsy, the point is that real stories were recited. Parents at the time probably worried about the unhealthiness of those new fangled pamplet things
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Love your story- poetically told with a wise message within it.
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Thanks so much. Just whimsy, but I’m fond of the wisdom of fools
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Smart story. Would not want to lose words like that, but it makes a fascinating premise.
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So long as we don’t lose our story
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