Friday Fictioneers – The Song

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

There’s a song, an old and now-unfashionable ditty. But, hearing it again, the memories flood him like a drain backing-up. All those days and all those secrets! Secrets he has never shared. The skylight’s great eye glares down. And he stares at her across the ballroom, his eyes full of love and despair.


Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

56 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – The Song

  1. An interesting metaphor, ‘the memories flood him like a drain backing-up’, conveying the idea of memories that are no longer wholesome. There’s unlikely to be a good outcome from this (now dead) relationship.

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