Hey! Only you can see this. Everyone else sees a cute story about an elopement. This message is just for you. I’m trapped between dimensions. Never mind how it happened, that’s not important. The point is, only you can save me. Remember our café? Be there at precisely noon on Valentine’s day. Follow the man who joins you at the table. Please.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
Neil MacDonald Author 
(But can everyone see this comment? In which case…)
What a sweet love story, very tender. Ah, young love…
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Thanks so much, Iain
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Some see romance and mystery, others – if they’re old enough – start humming “When I’m Cleaning Windows”
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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I’m prepared to wager there won’t be another story on this theme this week. Full marks for originality, Neil. I’m wondering how he got stuck there though.
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Thanks so much, Sandra. He was careless as he played with the spatio-temporal manifolds when waxing his flux craft
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Don’t you just hate it when that happens?
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I disagree, how he got there is important… To me…
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See my comment to Sandra
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Dear Neil,
I’m sorry I couldn’t read your story this week. 😉 Cute.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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LOL. Thanks so much, Rochelle
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This is sweet and imaginative.
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Thanks so much
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Lovely unique take.
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THanks so much
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But did they live happily ever after, or was everyone dead by the end of Act 4???
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The elopement? They were blissfully happy
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Of course the elopement. Was there another story? 😉
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:::enter Rod Serling:::
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Or Terry Pratchett, Take your pick
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The patter of tiny feet, but how many?
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Two. Four. No, a dozen
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Interesting take. A little romance, a little sci-fi.
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It all depends which story you received
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Ok Roger that (mentalist!) Good stuff, and totally off piste! Like it
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Thanks so much
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I love the mystery of this. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Bill
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i wanted to believe he would be saved. i really do. 🙂
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He will, if you keep the appoint,ment
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He/she will be there I am sure.
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I do hope so
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I felt special until I saw the only comments. Apparently, I am not the only one who can see the message.
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The comments are part of the illusion
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Brilliant take and just in time for Valentine’s Day, b/c even inter-dimensionality can’t mess with that. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Dora. Yes, there is a Valentine’s Day in every dimension, but in some it takes a bizarre and unsettling form
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Oh, I want to read more! Which is often the way I feel about your posts here 🙂
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What a lovely compliment. Thanks, LInda
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Sounds like an adventure is coming up.
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Your mission, should you choose to accept it
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Message received and understood, at least, I hope so!
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Don’t let me down
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Love it! Wins the award for most creative and has the sci-fi element!
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Thanks so much
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Ah, no elopement in my story! 😉 But, yeah, here’s to what we each see! 🙂
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Then you have a mission
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🙂
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Mine’s an Americano, please!
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It’ll be waiting for you
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Ha – great such an original take 🙂
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Thanks so much
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Oh, I like this…a nice blend of sci-fi and romance. Sweet and intriguing. Gotta love parallel dimensions eh…Call the Dr…
He’ll know exactly what to do. His sonic screwdriver fixes almost everything 😉
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Umm. I think that is the Doctor
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Ohhhh okay!! As in the Doctor. As in Dr Who?
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Ooooo mysterious ! Well I sure hope they get found. Darned dimensional travel be like that.
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Well done. I like the instructions.
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Thanks so much
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Loved this! An intriguing read.
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Thanks so much
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