
When the glass shattered, everything stood still. Dad’s greenhouse!
“Joel!” Dad sounded anxious.
Joel knew soon the tone would change to anger. “It was just a pebble, Dad. A small one.”
But Dad didn’t get angry. He put his hand to his mouth and gazed at the heavens.
“Just a small one,” he said. “A one gram microsatellite. Accelerated to a quarter the speed of light.”
He whipped out his calculator, punching the keys in panic.
“Jesus Christ! There’s no way of slowing it down. Impact of a small nuclear explosion on collision. How will the aliens understand? What have we done?”
Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
I think we have destroyed the aliens’ tomatoes!
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Actually, their whole planet
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Sorry, Neil, I did get that, I was just making a greenhouse joke
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Don’t worry. I understood
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Dear Neil,
One small pebble for mankind, one giant meteor for them.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oops
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No dinner for him…
Those who live in glass houses shouldn’t throw stones…
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Perhaps no dinner for any of us if the aliens retaliate
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You beat me to it!!
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Love the twist at the end 😀
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Thanks, Colline
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It depends on your size and the missile’s size. Were the aliens living in the greenhouse? —- Suzanne
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At those kind of speeds it depends on the projectile’s momentum. Even if the aliens are living in reinforced concrete millions of them will be annihilated
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I started out thinking I was reading a domestic drama and then…! Nice one Niel.
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Thanks, Keith
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You took us from a broken window to a galactic catastrophe at the speed of light 🙂
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I’m afraid that’s one of the problems of microfiction
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When you get hit by something at a quarter of the speed of light, it will surely have an impact… Nicely done.
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Thanks, Trent
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Big trouble around the corner!
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It’s one way to find out if there’s intelligent life in the galaxy!
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I think I can say with some certainty that you’ve taken a unique approach to the prompt.
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I hope that’s good
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A nice integration of current affairs into your fictional story. Joel’s dad is very believable.
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Thanks, Penny
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Nicely done! I like the weaving of current events and issues with everyday disasters and the realities of bigger ones many of us cannot fully comprehend. Butterfly wings and all that jazz.
NICE!
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Thanks so much
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A nice tale.
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Thanks, Neel
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Is it wrong to be relieved it was the aliens for once, and not doing it to ourselves? Probably just as bad with the same end result.
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Only if the aliens don’t retaliate
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Like it, good stuff
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Thanks so much
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Either they’re talking at cross purposes or Dad’s lost the plot!
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Dad has just realised something bigger may have been smashed
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Could this be considered a space butterfly effect? “Good” story even if about tragic output.
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It would probably be too kind to him to call it a butterly effect. The butterfly effect is about unpredictable and incalculable consequences. The consequences here were entirely calculable. He just didn’t calculate them
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Ah, ok.
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Nice twist – had to read it several times. So many interpretations one can put on it…well done!
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Thanks so much
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Small oops for us… huge one for them!
Very unique
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Thanks so much Dale
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That obviously wasn’t any ole greenhouse, was it? Love the imagination!
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Thanks so much, Sascha
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what have we done, indeed? 🙂
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Thanks for reading
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Never underestimate the power of a kinetic projectile…
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That’s the message
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A cliff hanger, love the pace and switch from domestic to galactic outer space. Good writing.
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Thanks. I think that’s probably the only way we can understand the galactic
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Dad certainly knows much more that he is telling. One kilo micro satellite why would it collide with anything if it is in its orbit? Is it moving in the direction of a collision at an enormous speed? There must be a way to avoid the collision.
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One gram. They’ve sent a swarm of microsatellites out into the galaxy
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Unique … a tale of an intergalactic direction.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks, Isadora
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And so that’s how it happened….
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Or something not entirely but almost quite unlike that
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Ah, the true story of why the aliens are always so intent on destroying us.
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Totally true
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Intriguing, I’d love more of this!
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Now I am thinking about all the satellites orbiting our Earth, what happens to them and the collected space junk? Is there a plan? There doesn’t seemed to have been one for plastic until it is almost too late. You frightened me with this one – well done.
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Spacs junk isn’t travelling fast enough to do this much damage, though it is a problem too, My micro-spacecraft here are travelling at a significant fraction of the speed of light and so have much more momentum
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Either that’s no ordinary greenhouse or Joel has a big future in sports – that’s some throwing arm he’s got. What an imaginative take – I love it.
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Thanks, Margaret. Joe’s throw just smashes the glass, as small boys are prone to do. Dad’s little pebbles are a whole lot more dangerous
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The transition from the pebble to the microsatellite is ingenious. An excellent tale.
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Thanks so muchm Magarisa
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Oops!
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Yup
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It’s almost like the butterfly effect. But with aliens in the mix. And I’m not sure they will accept an Oops from our side.
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They could get a little cross
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Will the aliens keep mum or retaliate ?
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Assuming any of them survive, of course
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It’s all tragic and dramatic, but what I really want to know is what drive they used to reach one quarter of the speed of light. 🙂
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they accelerated the microcraft by focussed laser beams and some gravitational slingshotting
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