
I set my ear against the curve of the giant shell. This is a ritual every time we come to the palace. The police guards stiffen to attention because it’s odd. Harve looks panicked because it’s his friend who’s being odd. But it’s a thing I have to do.
“You know they’re not real eggs, right?” Harve always asks. “Those are decorative barriers against truck bombs.”
Nobody knows except me. Inside these eggs, dragons are sleeping. And when the country’s in peril, they’ll scream forth into an angry sky. Inside the shell, I hear a tapping.
Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here.
Wow, this so intriguing and magical!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww I want one!
Great start to an epic tale.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Are you sure you want one? They do tend to burn the rugs
LikeLiked by 2 people
You have a point… perhaps they can be house trained – fingers crossed.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You may get through a number of rugs, and houses, while you find out
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice one. Are they related to the Dragoons?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Anthony. He’ll ask when they hatch
LikeLike
Dear Neil,
There’s one in every crowd, isn’t there? 😉 A bit of a cliff hanger there.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Rochelle
LikeLike
Roland asks can he have one, he thinks having a dragon will be fun!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Depends how much you believe he’s a reliable informant
LikeLike
Any story with dragons is a winner with me, Neil.
Let them fly!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLike
Ohhhh! That would be interesting. I wonder if it’s the peril called Trump that’s bringing them forth
About time too 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
The dragon may be hatching inside his head. Nobody else sees them
LikeLike
Dragons are getting ready to emerge!
He knows what even the guards don’t! Everyone’s in for a surprise/shock soon!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well, maybe. But the guards may be right and he may be deluded
LikeLike
If he can see the peril the country is in, perhaps he is the only sane one there.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Wales should be alright
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just don’t walk into any fires unless you’re sure!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m not sure he’s the cautious sort
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think the dragons have well and truly hatched now and I hope they’re about to save the humans on planet earth from themselves, Covid 19 and life in general.
Best wishes,
Rowena
LikeLiked by 2 people
The dragons may, of course, be entirely in his head
LikeLike
Sounds like they are about to burst forth – or not. Intriguing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Or he’s about to be carted away by men in white coats
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice tidy little study of a nutcase. Very neatly done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Jilly
LikeLike
I’m sure Harve’s friend is happy in the world he’s currently occupying. Nice one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Sandra
LikeLike
Love it! And pretty much every country is in peril just now. I’ve seen such barriers, and thought the same thing. Wouldn’t it be cool?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLiked by 1 person
An egg can hatch some awesome possibilities! Especially love the last line, “Inside the shell, I hear a tapping.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Paula. I almost didn’t include that last line
LikeLike
What a wondrous tale, Neil. I love any story having to do with dragons.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Jade
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome.
LikeLike
I have so many questions. You might want to write a sequel.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Can’t. Rochelle doesn’t allow it
LikeLiked by 1 person
Unless you use next week’s 100 words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Rochelle forbids serials
LikeLike
I had forgotten that.
LikeLike
And so begins the next lord of the rings! Good stuff
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLike
Bad things are going to happen very soon.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Or perhaps not. There are no such things as dragons
LikeLiked by 1 person
are they for real? whose side are they? for good or evil?
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m pretty sure they don’t exist
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the idea of this. The dragons’ time is nigh…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh! What a wonderful take! I’m sure the dragons are real! They must be.
LikeLiked by 1 person
In that case, they are
LikeLiked by 2 people
Perhpas it’s time for yo to make a quick exit?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Only if you think the dragons might be real
LikeLike
He has an imaginative view of the world.
LikeLiked by 1 person
He lives in his own little world
LikeLiked by 1 person
This could be the start of a great magical adventure. Loved your take on the prompt.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much
LikeLike
Perhaps we need some of these mini dragons to set things straight. Good story Neil. Mysterious and intriguing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Scorched earthm you think? Thanks so much
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ooooooo
Somethings waking up…
Fabulous piece Neil. Sucked me straight in.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Laurie
LikeLike
Some dragons just might be good right about now…love this!
LikeLike
Thanks so much
LikeLike
Excellent! I love a genuine piece of imagination.
LikeLike
Thanks so much, trish
LikeLike
We all like to think when we crack an egg we get the standard contents. What if it was a guess and we did crack open to release dragons – those one-hundred year-old eggs must be a challenge.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Many, many things come in eggs
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great imagination…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Shilpa
LikeLike
Very imaginative.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Dawn
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, I get the idea those shells are about to explode apart and the dragons leap into action. Interesting take, Neil
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much. Michael
LikeLike
Who’s the sane one here, I wonder? Love the POV in this one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Magarisa
LikeLiked by 1 person