
Do you remember? The goats strolling down the middle of the evacuated street, nibbling on garden hedges? And how we stood at our doors once a week, waving hesitantly to neighbours, and clapped the nurses and doctors? Do you remember what we learned about who we depended on and who was truly important?
Can we have forgotten so fast? Once, we knew what building back better might mean. But the past is sticky. It has oozed back to submerge the future we believed we once saw.
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All too true — those last sentences are absolutely stunning.
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Thanks so much, Ain
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Sticky indeed. Only yesterday I was wistfully thinking of the clearer skies and the goats of lockdown, while listening to the hyperbole erupting from Glasgow.
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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Dear Neil,
And what do we learn from the past? Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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It appears that new generations have to first relearn the failing of earlier societies. I enjoyed how you utilised the prompt
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So true. And it was only last year
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Yep!
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Ta!
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Sadly, I did predict at the time that it wouldn’t last, and as soon as we could, we’d be back to just how we were before.
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When will we learn?
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It seems to have gotten worse in some places.
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Oh, the memories and the doom. Good story.
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Thanks, Mason
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True that. Ohhh, how very quickly we return to our old, corrupt ways, eh. Great writing this week. Stay well!
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Thanks so much, Bear
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The other option, of course, is that maybe we never really learned any lessons in the first place, while we were busy clapping and staying safe while simultaneously demanding that the lowest paid put their lives at risk to keep our shops open and deliver stuff to our homes. But maybe I’m just a cynic.
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That is cynical, but not necessarily untrue
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What a smashing closing sentence! “It has oozed back to submerge the future we believed we once saw.” Kudos, Neil!
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Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, Penny
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It already seems so far away, doesn’t it? Such promise of change and better living…
Wonderfully written, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Dale
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I accidentally deleted the following comment from Jennifer Pendergast:
“I think we are too busy trying to get ‘back to normal’ to worry about whether normal was all good. I love the phrasing in this – the past is indeed sticky.”
Thanks so much, Jennifer
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Memories can truly flood us at times.
We do remember a lot when we set out remembering…
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And sometimes we forget too
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It’s very sad our propensity to forget. After the difficult year that has passed, where are we headed now? Great last lines especially!
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It is odd, isn’t it? Thanks so much, Brenda
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Many chose to forget, or simply sweep it aside. I have to agree with your words whilst wishing didn’t.
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I wish I didn’t, too
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Indeed, Neil. Human ignorance seems to know no bounds. Well done.
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Thanks so much, Bill
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For some of my colleagues, who work with covid patients even as we speak, there is the disorienting reality of it being supposedly ‘over’ (or to some of their patients, even as they gasp for air, never a reality) … even while they themselves are faced with the stark awfulness of illness and loss and death on a daily basis, only that now they are also seen as enemies by some for even speaking the word that’s become synonymous somehow with political affiliation and color of one’s baseball cap. How strange people can be, when they refuse to accept reality, and how oh-so-very-shortly-selective some people’s memories are …
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I don’t understand how public health became a political issue, but you’re absolutely right
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I think I can understand it, cognitively, as a very successful campaign of gaslighting (which is a known way to brainwash and make a non-issue an issue, while making the real issues, non-issues). I cannot, however, understand how so many allow it to happen. For to understand it, truly, is to realize just how many seek harm over healing, power over people.
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Excellent story, you really make every word count. Humans these days have the attention span of toddlers. What we see is enlightening. I used to have illusions about humanity wanting to improve… Hahaha…
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I think most of us want to improve. But it’s not made easy for us
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When the younger generation – those who will still be alive at the end of this century – are in power, they might care more and do better.
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They’ll have to. But they won’t look back on us fondly
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Wow. This really hit home. How quickly we forget, right? Just the other day, I caught myself thinking a bit fondly of the early lockdowns – how the world seemed to come together, then. Not that I want people to die or for a pandemic to rage, but I do wish we’d managed to hold on to some of the things that occurred during that period.
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Thanks so much, Patricia
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Sad, and unfortunately true. The illusions held only as long as they needed to.
pax,
dora
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I hope it wasn’t an illusion
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as it stands, we can only live in the present and make the best of it.
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But we always have the choice to change the future
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Karl Marx wrote: “”History repeats itself, first as tragedy, second as farce.” Bruce Cockburn sings “The trouble with normal is it always gets worse.” We, as a society, have short memories . . .
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We do indeed. Until, of course, we don’t
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Yes, let’s hope for the non-repeating version.
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Oh, nicely put. Very visual. And of course we don’t learn from the past
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To be fair, last year was a long time ago
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Sadly Neil, so true. Time to look forward though.
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Thanks, Susan
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So true.
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Thanks for reading
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Those who will not learn from the past are doomed to repeat it.
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Some mistakes have no repeat button
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A thought provoking story, especially the last paragraph. I think the idea that the past is sticky is so good.
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Thanks so much
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Such a powerful, true story.
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Thanks so much, Anne
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