
“That’s such a great idea,” Pfennig said. “A seed bank.”
And it was true. The metal shelves held hazelnuts, garlic cloves, and lumpy nodules I couldn’t identify.
We’d survive, Pfennig decided. Dig up the parks, plant the seeds, harvest our own food. When the soldiers at last removed the barriers around the city, they’d find us healthy and thriving. Then we’d walk out proudly into the sunshine of the new world.
He clapped me on the back, and I beamed with pride, unable to confess a squirrel had done the collecting. All I’d been gathering was graffiti.
Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here.
Nice twist at the end. Liked it.
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Thanks, Anthony
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We have a mythological story about a squirrel rolling in mud, and then shedding it on the bridge Lord Ram was building to reach Srilanka. His humble effort to help was recognised, and the petting by Ram is supposed to have given them the stripes. The gargantuan effort by your squirrel reminded me of that.
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How wonderful to make bridges, especially to mythology
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Thanks 🙂
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Dystopian humour, what’s not to like!
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It’s coming to a park near you
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It doesn’t matter who does the gathering. As long as there is sowing, they’ll survive and that’s all that matters. I really enjoyed the twist on your dystopian tale!
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But, of course, by keeping quiet about the truth, he gets to appear like a far-sighted planner and may emerge as leader
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Hmm, smart guy. Deceptive … but smart! I know of a few of those. =)
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Sounds like a good division of labor. After all, squirrels are terrible at graffiti. 🙂
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Someone’s going to have to gather the cereal seeds though
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He he – loved that ending!
Susan A Eames at
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Thanks so much, Susan
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Dear Neil,
Sounds like a very resourceful squirrel. Clever story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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There’s subtlety to this tale, I think, a questioning as to how on earth mankind has managed to survive with our venal preoccupation for reputation, and our reliance on the natural world to provide for us without much input from us.
And all done so light-heartedly! Kudos!
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You always see to the heart of my stories. Thanks, Penny
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I am afraid I am too on the graffiti side of things. Your story is seriously funny…or funny serious.
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Thanks so much. That sort of mixture was just what I was aiming for
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I feel for the squirrel who has lost it all, that’s another story. I wonder if the modern west would be able to adapt in such a way to sustain itself in a similar situation? No supermarkets!!
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I remember one idiot who was paid a lot of money for his plan to solve food insecurity – supermarkets in poverty-striken areas
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There is a great story hidden behind this.
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Thanks so much Colline
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Love the sly humor in this. And it does look like a squirrel hoard!
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Thanks, Joshua
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Nice, and fairly lighthearted, great twist although I don’t thinks graffiti collection needs work!! I’m hoping this week will be a cheerful FF to detract from the awfulness which seems to be occurring Globally right now.
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I can only manage fairly light hearted
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Love those nut-collecting squirrels!
Randy
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Thanks
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Yay to the squirrel! 🙂
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They may have to hunt the squirrel to get a balanced diet
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LOL. Can the squirrel find me some sweets? 😉
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A very inventive take on the prompt photo, Neil. I think Detroit is turning a lot of its vacant lots into gardens these days.
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Thanks so much, Jade
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You’re welcome.
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I did enjoy the squirrel angle.. I am planting broad beans as we speak, … other vegetable seeds are awaiting warmer weather.
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Thanks, Mike
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In times of disaster, the animals always know best.
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Or at least they concentrate on basic needs
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Best keep quiet about the squirrel and just run with it…
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Maybe save it some nuts and hope it continues
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A twisty trope tantillises us at the end. Well done.
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So long as we are not hung by the twisty tropes
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😁
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I always thought squirrels must have a purpose, now I know! Nice one.
Here’s mine!
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Thanks so much, Keith
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Nicely done. I see a young man. Still in short pants..
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Yes, I imagined them young
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Great twist, but a good idea to feed themselves.
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Thanks Liz
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Haha! Oh dear.
Loved the last line
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Thanks, Laurie
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methinks, the squirrel deseves a monument for its efforts. 🙂
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a pile of hazelnuts perhaps?
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Oh, my. That was so serious and noble, and then–SQUIRREL!!
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Bathetic
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Those clever little squirrels! Great fun Neil.
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Thanks so much, Russell
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I’m afraid the siege is over, unfortunately they will have to raise the white flag – damn grey squirrels.
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Thanks for reading, James
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I like the switch from the the occupying soldiers siege scenario to the industrious squirrels scooping the harvest, from big boots to little rodents.
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it does invert the normal rules of building tension
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Always fun to see your take.
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Thanks, Ted
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Love the twist. Too funny.
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Thanks, Susan
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Whimsical fun, I enjoyed this Neil
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Thanks, Michael
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Well, it sounds like a great plan, no matter how it originated.
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It may work out after all
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Squirrels are experts in collecting. That’s why I don’t have any daffodils this year. A naughty grey tree-rat dug them up and hid them, probably in somebody else’s garden! I love this story’s twist in the tale (tail).
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Thanks so much, Sarah
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Stealing from squirrels, I think that’s OK if it means you survive.
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The next stage is eating them
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I think he was wise to claim the work of a squirrel 😉
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The animal will never know and never miss the praise
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