“Third floor, west wing, second window from the right.”
I sighted, zoomed in. “Locked on.”
“You’re authorized to take the shot once you have acquisition.”
The view was grainy. My hands were clammy. Odd, because I never get involved. Perhaps the world-changing magnitude of the target made some nervousness acceptable: the first hit on a target three centuries in the past.
A shape at the window. Smaller than he appeared in his pictures. I squeezed the trigger. Everything changed.
The tau-beam gun hands vanished. The birdsong vanished. The command voice in my earpiece vanished. What had I done?
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
Dear Neil,
Ooh…interesting. A time traveling hit man? You left me hanging with lots of questions. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle. I’m afraid this one was a bit mechanical
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Sounds like the command voice should have done some more research.
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Some consequences you can’t predict until you try
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Did he blast himself into another century? Intriguing, indeed.
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He changed the past in ways they hadn’t expected
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Looks like whoever they’ve taken out had a big impact on the history of the world. Nice idea.
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People just don’t think before they act
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Things changed but not in the way he anticipated. Interesting!
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Not at all how he anticipated
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Well now you’re involved all right, Mr (or Ms) Sniper! I got a sense we were witnessing somebody make a huge mistake. Skilful writing as usual, Neil.
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Ooooooops!
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Changing the past dissolves the present and reshapes the future. Can our hitman accept the responsibility, clearly not. Time to get a new job, perhaps travelling to the past to reset the genealogy of certain dictators, just a thought.
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Sadly, humans travelling to the past tend to be internally rearranged. Only projectiles make it.
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Well, here’s another fine mess you’ve gotten us into!
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If only he’d listened to his maths teacher at school
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Great story, with a lot to consider
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Thanks so much, Michael
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Very cool story here. A time traveling hitman whose latest assignment may have eliminated his own existence! Lots of stuff to think about here!
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Thanks so much, Michael
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it looks like he has reached the point of no return.
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Way way beyond it
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Fascinating story. It’s tempting to take out a villain from the past, but what are the ramifications? It’s a mind-bender.
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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Oh,no! Has he changed the world?
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Accidents happen
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Neil a creative way of highlighting the risks of messing with things in time travel situations. There is just no way of knowing what the net outcome of those “tweaks” will be.
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Thanks so much, Jade
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An intriguing tale. Anything to do with time travel requires a lot of careful thinking…messing with the past, changing the future. Well written!
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Thanks so much Fleur
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Oooo now you know I’m going to be fascinated with this! Time travelling hit man? Right up my alley. I want to know more!
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I did think of you when I wrote this. Thanks so much, Laurie
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Three centuries past……. that left me confused. Perhaps something Einsteinian there?
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A time travelling hit man. Or more precisely, a device that allows bullets to travel into the past
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quite intriguing and a cautionary tale.
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Thanks so much
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Sounds like your hit man was a better shot than mine – not sure how much good it did him though… this would make a nice back-of-book blurb!
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Now all I have to do is write another 70,000 words
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Easy peasy, right?
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So many possibilities, so much to build on,
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Thanks. Kathy
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I have no idea what the ending is about. And what’s a Tau-beam?
Otherwise, loved the poetry of it.
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Thanks, Patrick. He changed the past and so he changed his present
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Ooo…what has he done?
Fun read.
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Thanks so much, Dawn
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