
When you left, you took my certainty. You accuse me of betrayal, and I can see why, on consideration. But I dare not contemplate this. To do that would erode the precarious ledge of footing, risking a catastrophic plummet.
So, I must blame you, and counter this betrayal to mine. I should have known—your eyes were always too close together.
The truth is, I don’t know what to believe, or who. Trusting has become so hard, including in the story I imagined was mine—I am no longer made of whole cloth.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

I really like the “I should have known” line. Very good.
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Dear Neil,
An apt response to the prompt. The fabric of contemplation.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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Yes, life can be like that–confusion–without logic or reason. I suspect we are the weave of our own cloth and people come in many patterns in life. Finding the right colour can be an arduous task. Great emotion of feeling hurt in your story.
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Thanks so much, James
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Inventive take on this prompt. Unexpected, which shouldn’t surprise me at all, coming from you 🙂
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Thanks so much, Linda
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Perhaps it was never meant to be. A sorry story indeed.
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Thanks, Keith
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Good articulation of a person whose world has been shaken. Honest assessment on the his part and I like that tidbit of humor about the other person’s eyes.
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Thanks so much, Jade
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You’re welcome, Neil.
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p.s. sorry for jumbled words. 2nd sentence re-written: Honest assessment on the MC’s part, and I like… eyes.
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I’ve been there. Never trust someone whose eyes are too close together. Creative take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much
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Nice way to take a metaphorical bent on the picture, Neil.
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Thanks so much, David
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I like where you took the prompt. Sometimes when everything is said and done the truth becomes a casualty of the war.
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Thanks so much Tannille. Sometimes, yes, we can’t afford truth
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I enjoyed the back and forth of this wee tale. And the end line finally connected the story to the prompt. Nicely done.
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Thanks so much, Alicia
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great use of metaphor. well done.
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So clever Neil 🙌
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Thanks so much
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Very well done. Losing trust tears your web of comfort apart.
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Such a unique take on the prompt with being a whole cloth. And the “I should have known” its clear things have not been happy and perhaps were not happy for a long time.
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Nice take!
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Thanks so much
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Oh gawd…this is so sad. I can totally relate!
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Thanks so much. Dawn
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