
Harry, they say, is a keen plantsman. But is that the same as a horticulturalist? He knows the Latin names, so perhaps. Or do I want, maybe, a nurseryman? It’s confusing to have so many words for gardener.
“What exactly do you want?” he asks.
I wave my hands in what I hope is visionary gesture.
Harry suggests, “Something formal? Cottage garden? Zen meditative space? Wildlife haven?”
I see he’s trying to be helpful, but choice paralyses me.
“Umm, you know, a trim and a tidy up.” That sounds ridiculous, as if I was at the barbers. “Maybe another day?”
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Dear Neil,
I’d say Harry knows his craft. The MC needs to decide what he really wants.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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And therein lies his problem
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Start with a trim and a tidy up. Sometimes indecisiveness requires baby steps.
Thoughtful story.
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Thanks so much, Dawn
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Well-told story. I hope he decides to give the professional free rein and a $$ cap to do the magic.
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Thanks so much, Jade
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You’re most welcome, Neil.
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Nice one.
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Thanks so much
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I can relate to this story. Sometimes we have no idea except “good”.
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Or make it better
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I can relate to Harry’s scenario. Decide it already!
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Decision is traumatic for him
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It’s even more traumatic to sit guessing & trying to read someone else’s mind 😦
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So many words! I’ve learned a new one here – ‘plantsman’. I like it. Good story. I like Harry, but I think he might be an easy mark for a shifty plantsman.
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He is trying his best to resist chosing
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A trim and a tidy up sounds about right. Well done.
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Thanks so much
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Choices, choices, always difficult. Luckily a garden is not a fixed thing and can be changed.
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That thought has not occurred to his paralysed mind
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I’d say he just needs an odd-job person with some clippers and a broom!
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He’s seriously regretting having started the whole transaction
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Poor guy has a hard time making up his mind. One wonders if he’s had a breakdown of some sort, or perhaps was never allowed to make up his own mind as he grew up. The therapist in me would enjoy a session or two with this MC.
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He sees more possibilities than most
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MY gardener isn’t even a gardener. He couldn’t name many plants and doesnt know which are weeds, but when I need a shrub dug up or a tree trimmed, he’s great at £16 an hour!
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Sounds like just the job
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Be practical, just let Harry decide, and do all the hard work. I am sure whatever garden he creates it will be perfect.
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But what if it’s the wrong style of garden?
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I think a trim and a tidy up covers it pretty well. I’m sure Harry will get the idea. Nice story, Neil.
-David.
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Thanks so much, David
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perhaps the wife can help him decide. 🙂
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Oh he’s never been able to make his mind up who to propose to
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The ending made me laugh 😀 And I do this a lot “I wave my hands in what I hope is visionary gesture.”
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Thanks so much, Dahlia
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Love the ‘visionary gesture’ 😄- doesn’t always translate to what’s in the mind’s eye, although in his case I’m not surprised great story Neil 🙌
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Thanks so much
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Some just cannot make a decision on their own…
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Still less with others’ help
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Only brings more confusion!
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To many choices can be paralyzing. A trim and a tidying up seems like a good place to start.
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The trouble is no gardener worth his salt would understand the instruction
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A little off the sides should do for now!
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You spotted his reference
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Nice! I love his Indecisiveness. Fun piece.
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Thanks so much
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So tricky, language. Keep it simple is best. Love this, Neil. You highlight the confusion of being presented with too many options too quickly.
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Thanks so much, Laurie.
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