
I’m pretty sure it’s not a black hole. In the first place, it’s square and I can imagine no way gravitational forces might assume such a shape. In the second place, what would a black hole be doing in my greenhouse?
But something is soaking up all the light, which probably isn’t great for my grapes. I’ll ask Betty. She knows everything.
“Oh that,” she says. “That’s my slough of despond.”
A pretty price she negotiates for its disappearance. Still, how bad can a fortnight in the Caribbean be?
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Superb!!! Beautifully written. ☺️
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Thanks so much, Sunil
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High price for the “black hole” 🙂
Caribbean trip will be pricey.
But, greenhouse is wonderful & so priceless!
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Seems a fair deal
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Dear Neil,
If it means a fortnight in the Caribbean, I want one in my garden.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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Now I have all kinds of questions, like who do you call to get rid of that and will it turn the grapes into grapes of wrath or maybe just ferment them into whine. 🙂 Such a charming story, I love it.
-David
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Thanks so much, David
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Took me a second to understand what a brilliant woman Betty is 🙂
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Betty is like that. Understated
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So clever and well-written, Neil. You’re right. Seems small price to pay.
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Thanks so much, Jade
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Clever Betty, and such a great negotiator 🙂
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Thanks so much
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It seems a fair price; plus does one want to have that hanging over their head? I think not!
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Thanks, Dale. He isn’t too put out by the price
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Definitely worth it!
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He’ll get his grapes, she, her holiday – sounds good to me!
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Win win
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most definitely, she has a way with words. now we know who’s wearing the pants in the house. 🙂
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Her argument has an inescapable logic
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Haha grown or formed naturally. Well done. There is still a little whimsical quality to the piece. Well done
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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I had to read it twice to understand it. Betty is clever. Hope the grapes are sweet like two weeks in the Caribbean will be.
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Thank you so much
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Anything to save the grapes. That Betty is a clever one.
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Runs rings around him
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Depending on how fast that slough breaks, it sounds a better deal than the carribean.
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That’s his thinking
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What a lovely idea, she says, donning her slough of despond and going in search of her husband… Nice one, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Sandra
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That Betty’s one smart cookie! Nice one, Neil.
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Thanks so much
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