
It is not at all like in story books. Not knights riding out to slay dragons and rescue maidens, we are savage marauders, reeking and unkempt. Only our weapons are meticulously clean. The villagers share their paltry rations with us, not out of gratitude, but from fear.
I arrived here dreaming of noble deeds and just reward. But chivalry is a myth. The fair maidens scream and endure while we rut and laugh, glutting on lewd revenge. Someone will die at my hands. Whether it will be the enemy, my comrades or my commander, I’m still unsure.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Dear Neil,
Definitely not a story book ending. Nice contrasts.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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The true tale of Knights.
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Absolutely
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Such are the spoils of war.
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Spoils is the right word
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ahhh, such a poignant ending and storybook endings can be so blaise and benign and your rich fiction showed harsh realties
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Thanks so much, Prior
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😉
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Bringing out the true spirit of war that lives inside some men’s heart. Nicely done.
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Thanks so much, Will
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Sounds pretty close to how the Crusades were portrayed versus how they really were, for example. Knights are always chivalrous. Well told story, Neil.
-David
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Thanks so much, David
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And he seems not care who might die at his hands. A true warrior then. Good one, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Sandra
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Now I’m picturing Vikings and the like – they were so NOT like in the fairy tales… Very nicely done!
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Thank so much, Dale
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i don’t think this will end well. 😦
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I think you’re right
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Oh well done
A true story of blood and death and dishonourable actions.
It’s certainly not Hollywood knights that’s for sure.
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Thanks so much, Laurie.
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A marauder who has second thoughts and reflects… that’s not something you usually read in the stories. Well done.
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Thanks so much
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A great take on the prompt Neil 🙌
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Thanks so much
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enemy, comrades or commander…he truly doesn’t care who dies…
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No, such is his despair.
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Stark raw reality – very well done!
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Thanks so much. Dahlia
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I think we have only to look around us to know for sure that what you say here is the truth- and the romanticized version we were taught about the honor of men is a lie. Brilliant writing, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Violet
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Interesting POV, I almost felt sorry for him.
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Thanks so much, Dawn
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What we have here is a true feeling of hopelessness.
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Thanks so much, Nancy
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