
There is a dead dog on the floor. My dog. A moment ago, before the injection, she was wagging her tail trustingly. Now death has come, silent and graceful, to my home—a black furry absence. My dog is no longer in this body.
Before it happened, I’d begun washing the car, something I stopped half-way when the vets arrived. Now afterwards I’m not sure what to do. All that suggests itself is finishing the car wash. I’m glad she had that totter around the park on Monday.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Dear Neil,
I hope the dog was euthanized with a good reason. The narrator seems a bit callous.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The narrator is probably numb
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I have to choose ‘like’ but this time it really should be ‘appreciate’. This is the last kind thing we can do for our animals, but that’s so much easier to say when it isn’t my animal. Your closing sentence is vivid. Perfect.
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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Heartbreaking
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Thanks so much
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I know exactly where you’re coming from.
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Thanks so much
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This has got to be the hardest thing I have ever endured. I know this exact feeling.
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Thanks so much, Violet
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The sense of grief and loss comes across with the stunted numbness, in this emotional story.
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Thanks so much, James
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Poor old girl. She knew you loved her. Condolences if this is based an actual happenings.
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Thanks so much, Lisa
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You are welcome, Neil.
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Poor guy is numb from the pain of losing his furry member of the family. It was the same for me.
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Thanks so much, Dale
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Great write Neil, the narrator is so matter of fact, but I sense it’s through the loss ❤️
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Exactly right. Thanks so much
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Oh this is so sad. That numbness of everything being wrong that she’s gone… I feel that here. I’m glad she had time at her favourite park too.
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Hit me right in the feels.
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Thanks so much, Dawn
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I can’t imagine how that must feel. A touching story indeed, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Keith
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Almost crying here. Been there, done that, I know exactly how it feels, that mixture of sadness and also relief that the poor pet friend doesn’t have to suffer any longer. And the numbness afterwards.
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Thanks so much
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I think the numbness is a way to cope with his loss. Sometimes, these things must be done, sadly so. Nicely written, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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It’s never easy. And rightly so.
Wonderfully detached voice, his coping mechanism.
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Thanks so much, Nancy
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The anguish of the shell-shocked narrator hits deep.
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Thanks so much, Dahlia
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