
He was in the presence of a miracle. Not the burning bush kind. No angels swooped down with fiery swords. But a miracle nonetheless. The air coruscated, and nothing was quite like it had been a moment before.
A voice which issued from no mortal mouth sounded the bell of his skull. “Go forth and slay my enemies.”
That was disconcerting.
Though feeling a little foolish, he answered, “I’m really not sure that would be the right thing to do.”
“So be it,” the voice replied. “Many are called, few are chosen.”
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

“That was disconcerting” really made me smile.
Nicely done.
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Thanks so much
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Glad he had the courage to say what he wanted to.
Hope the voice does him no harm.
Looks like many had already been in the same place as him before, and perhaps many had refused to heed to that voice’s command, maybe?
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More than we might think refuse to heed that command
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I’m pretty sure I’d risk turning it down too!
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There may be smiting
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I remember the time Moses tried to say “no” to the Almighty. Didn’t work out so well for Jonah, either.
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Sometimes you just have to remain true to your principles
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I would rather avoid that one myself. I will have to remember that line!
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Thanks so much, Violet
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A story that leaves me feeling ambivalent. Well-written, Neil.
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Ambivalence sort of fits this story. Thanks so much, Lisa
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Yes it does. You are welcome, Neil.
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That was a very phlegmatic response from the higher deity. I’d like to think I would be afforded such latitude. Good one, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Sandra
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Dear Neil,
I think I’d question that voice myself. Thanks for teaching me a new word.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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My pleasure, Rochelle
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i wish trump’s acolytes would have the same courage to stand up to the dear leader. 🙂
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There may be consequences
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Maybe seeing a psychiatrist wouldn’t be a bad idea for him. In any case, a brave guy, and good for him to stand up.
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True, he is either crazy or divinely inspired
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Maybe it was a test…he did the right thing 😊
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That’s a generous interpretation. Thank you
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Good to know there is a right of refusal. To me it makes no sense that “almighty god” would have enemies, but since it’s all made up it is just the manifestation of the people, which as you say, is disconcerting.
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Thanks so much
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Well, I think that was too big an ask. I think I might question as well. Enjoyable tale, Neil!
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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Indeed that was disconcerting !
Nicely done, Neil
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Good on him for speaking up. The disconcerting line was well placed 👌
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Thanks so much, Fleur
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He chose wisely.
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Thanks, Nancy
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You are welcome 😊
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