
The walls are closing in, and there is hardly enough space now for me to transit the room. The table and chairs have become strangely elongated, affording me length and height but a shrinking breadth. All around me, hordes are panicking, wailing and rushing hither and thither as the world becomes two-dimensional.
I am calm. This just cannot be happening—therefore, it’s an illusion, something I ate, no doubt, and I can quell it by my will.
Odd. Now the ceiling is coming in. I wonder how I will fare in lineworld.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Dear Neil,
Perfect take on the prompt. I could feel the walls closing in. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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A very scary situation!
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Unless it’s all in his mind
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Maybe his drink has been spiked. But still, it sounds like a more interesting world than we’re used to. I always know I’m going to read something different here, Neil.
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Having just watched A christmas Carol last week, part of your story, “something I ate, no doubt, and I can quell it by my will” – reminded me of when Scrooge tries to explain the ghost as a disturbance in his digestion: “a slight disorder of the stomach makes them cheats. You may be an undigested bit of beef…”
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We do reach for the most likely explanation. And 99% of the time, it’s the right one
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;0)
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Reminds me of the line, “…more gravy than grave.”
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Thanks so much, James
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The squeeze is on!
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Indeed
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Neil, good metaphor. Our worlds are shrinking at an alarming rate.
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Thanks so much, Lisa
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You’re very welcome.
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It’s the end of the world as we know it, but I feel fine. I hope he’s right about the impossibilty of the events.
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“Lineworld” – Love it. Great story, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Will
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Why am I suddenly gasping for air? Nicely done!
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Thanks so much, Dale
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Claustrophobic in a nutshell.
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Thanks, James
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I don’t want what he had! Very neat take.
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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Now’s the time to stand in line. Oh dear!
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The Brits will be ideally suited to the new linear world order
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what was he smoking? it can sometimes muddle reality.
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Shrooms perhaps
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Ooh, gosh!!
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Thanks for reading, Chris
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Ooooo lineworld sounds kinda terrifying actually.
Great take on the prompt Neil
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Thanks so much, Laurie. Just remember to weave a little as you walk, and you’ll avoid lineworld
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Lineworld. Oh my…
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Not a pretty fate, I agree
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very zen of home to take it all in stride. Perhaps it’s all in his mind, or gut, perhaps the world is contracting.
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He won’t know for sure until it happens
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