
The Duke was a cunning man. He’d always say, “If a lord has a strong castle and many loyal soldiers, he’s in trouble.”
“Why is that?” I once asked.
“Because it means he must also have many enemies.”
The man built his place simply, with a covering of wattle and daub over hewn stone and stout mortar. “A place, not a palace,” he’d say with a snigger.
Nobody bothered him. Nobody came to pillage his glittering staterooms and dancing fountains.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Interesting!
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Thank you
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All about choices, as always. The duke might be safe, but his imprisonment by fear isn’t so appealing. What’s the point of riches and beautiful stuff if you can’t share with trusted mates? Though maybe the narrator is a trusted mate.
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Insightful comment as always. Thanks so much, Jilly
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Image is everything. Particularly where safety is concerned.
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Or lack of image. Thanks so much, Sandra
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That’s one way to keep the riff-raff out!
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He’s a cunning fellow
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That he is!
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Dear Neil
I guess it shows to go that one shouldn’t judge a palace by its exterior. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A simple exterior was characteristic of Moorish palaces, like the Alhambra
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Hiding in plain sight. Works every time.
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Yup
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He learned to hide well. Well done.
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Thanks so much, athling
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A winning logic.
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It’s worked well in the past
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Neil, I also saw the exterior as great camouflage. I agree with The Duke.
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Great minds
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Love it! Wisdom with interesting story.
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Thanks so much
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That’s smart!
No one carried his treasures away 🙂
There was no moat also!
Lovely, Neil.
Wishing you a Merry Chrsitmas in advance.
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A moat would have been a dead giveaway
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I like his logic! Actually, it’s a bit like my place, shabby on the outside, chic on the inside – or so I’m told!
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Thanks so much, Keith
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So he built with wattle and daub but furnished it richly? Doens’t the silly man realise word spreads?
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Not if you’re careful who you let through the door
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One man’s home is another man’s castle …. or words to that effect.
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Or one man’s hovel is another’s castle?
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One’s home is one’s castle… all in the eye of the beholder
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As is the deception
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Indeed!
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Poor sod, so full of fear.
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Uneasy lies the head …
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Camouflage can be a great security feature.
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It’s working for him
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Perhaps. One day someone may take advantage of his stance.
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That is the weakness of his straeegy. He has only one trick
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Ha! Clever!
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Thanks, Dawn
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That’s a novel way to protect his property. It could catch on. Then what would all the rich folk do? A most entertaining story, as always, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Margaret
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Happy holidays and a Merry time to all during this festive season.
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Thanks, James
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That’s a clever plan! Like a tardis…bigger and better on the inside 😉
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Exactly. Except it doesn;t time travel
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Lol…imagine if it did. Or if unwanted people at the front door mysteriously disappeared. Woops…I think I need to lock my muse in a cupboard!
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Nice post ✍️
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Thanks
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