
Call her Tiamat, call her Leviathan, also known as Jörmungandr or Cirein-cròin. Old as the primordial ocean, she is a creature of the roiling water—the essence of creation and chaos.
I call her Kraken, but not, of course, to her face. When she finishes swimming laps (three), she’ll expect me poolside with a soft towel and cool drink. And I will smile and caress her, though my skin crawls with revulsion at her flabby, wrinkled flesh.
Not long now. All she has to do is sign the will and then she can be one with the waves again.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

‘At one with the waves’ indicates your protagonist might be haunted by what he’s about to do – and so a story flows onward. Let’s hope The Kraken awakes 🙂 and has a sharp-witted lawyer drawing up that will of hers. Great fun stuff.
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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Dear Neil
Eeeew. That was ominous.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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Not the kindest and most caring of escorts, but a soft towel and a cool drink have a lot going for them when you’ve been slogging it out in the pool. Any Kraken worthy of the name will see that.
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Thanks so much, Sandra
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I love how this story opens as though the ‘she’ is a mythical creature but then reveals she’s just a monster to the narrator. It brought me right into the narrator’s unhappy and devious mind.
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Thanks so much, Clare. That was just what I intended
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Where there’s a will there’s a way! Nice one, Neil.
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Thanks so much, Keith
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Sinister expectations waiting for change, she will not sign her will. She is enjoying a really pampered time.
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For now, anyway
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Wonderfully sinister ending gave me a dark chuckle.
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Thanks so much, Nancy
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Hey there Neil. Methinks I ended up in your spam?
I KNOW I left a comment about the reversal of stereotypes…
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I wondered why you didn’t comment
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Did it end up trashed or spammed? Or did I press erase instead of post 🤔.
So yesh, a nice reversal of roles here. Waiting out for the payload… Hoping there’s no change in the will they don’t know about!
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Oooooooo
This is creepy but so nicely written ! You really got into his mind in the moment. Well done Neil
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Blimey! That was good, calling her the Kraken was a master stroke, and I’m not sure if roiling water is a typo or a real word, but I love it anyway!!
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Thanks so much, and, yes, roiling is a real word
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i wish him luck. she’s smarter than he thinks. 🙂
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I think you’re right
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I wonder if she is the Kraken is he Jack Sparrow
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Or perhaps a much much older character
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Wow. I agree, it starts off as mythical and ends as creepy and devious. Being pampered with a towel sounds ok to me, I’ve just done my 30 laps for the week.
Will she sign the will…great story!
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Thank so much, Fleur
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Sorry, just catching up! You’re welcome 😊
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I think she may be flabby and wrinkly but not stupid. His disdain is palpable.
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He may, indeed, be in for a rude shock
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I hope so, just because us wrinkly and flabby gals have to stick together. 🙂
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I enjoyed the comparison of the relative to a mythical creature. She’s clever, I think, and will draw it all out awhile. Excellent story!
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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