
When the tendrils began to fall, it felt like light warm rain. At first. Only later did we realise what they can do. In the beginning, all was joyous, like snow on Christmas Day. We experienced bliss as the things dewed our skin. It was rapture.
Now we know that they secrete chemicals that trigger our neurotransmitters. Perhaps too late we’ve started to resist. Our homes are sealed tight, and we go out now only in hazmat suits.
But I’ve made a terrible discovery. The tendrils are not sentient—they’re weapons. After them, something else is coming.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Woo! Scary.
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Thanks so much
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You are most welcome
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Sounds like the thought police are on their way… oh wait! Good one, Neil.
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Or something much much worse. The Gnurs come from the woodwork out
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Dear Neil,
Terrifying! Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Sad that they are doing this… This may be reality in the future 😦
How long can we resist? How many advanced suits can we get?
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Thanks, Anita
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I knew it wasn’t just rain. 😉
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Nah. It looks nothing like rain
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Please! Nothing else sinister this decade please!
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But we’re only half way through
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Ack! That last bit gave me bad tingles. I thought you were going to say the tendrils were digestive agents.
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I’m glad the last bit worked. Thanks so much, Lisa
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You’re very welcome, Neil.
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Scary stuff – if the weapons are that bad, what does that say about the creatures who wield them?
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Thanks so much
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I thought that rain looked a little weird! I love the Sci-Fi bent.
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Thanks so much, Clare
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I have goosebumps – so good Neil 🙌
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Thanks so much
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Oooooooo
End times
Great concept with the rain not being rain but a weapon. I bet what comes next is worse.
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This is just the softening up phase. Thanks so much, Laurie
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wow that accelerated quickly! caught me off guard well done Neil
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Thanks so much
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scary stuff.
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Thanks so much
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Nice build up of tension with an ominous ending.
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Thanks so much
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This has a great War of the Worlds vibe.
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Thanks so much
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Now that’s baleful, whatever next?
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Whatever indeed!
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Is the realisation of an attack come too late?
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Much much too late
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Ugh! My raptures look nothing like this.
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Different strokes?
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