
“ … wont’ do it.”
Well, that’s definitive, and now I face a choice. I can meet immovable objection with irresistible force or capitulate and seek a way round. Cogs grind and wheels spin as I imagine the possible outcomes. Force is all or nothing—if he doesn’t cave in to counter-pressure, all that remains is to walk away. Capitulation allows evasion and new attempts. The choice seems obvious.
As I open my mouth in reply, it feels clogged with a chewy, bitter substance. Words form as if from nothing.
“Well, fuck you.”
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

Dear Neil,
I guess that beats supercalifragilisticexpialadoshush as a reply. To the point and easier to say. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle
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Eloquent.
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Pithy, even
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Skip the capitulation- just walk away..
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😅 a masterclass in the perfect retort – made me laugh out loud so thanks Neil 🙌
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