
In the silvered night, he steals down alleys, ferrying old books from the library to secret caches. The Pure are already calling beyond the walls. When they enter the city, they’ll root out heresy with a great bonfire and smashing of icons. Corpses will swing from the gates.
The librarian isn’t sure whether astronomical texts, and studies of verse are heretical. But he suspects they may be. He believes the invaders might find the land inventory useful. And this too he bears into hiding.
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I can picture him scurrying through the alleyways. Evocative and powerful, and a practical thinker too with that last note. Well done Neil.
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Thanks so much, Iain
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The land inventory might be too useful indeed. Loved the tone in this, Neil. Dark and dry.
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Thanks so much
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Echoes of Bradbury in this potent tale
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Ray?
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I loved it from the moment I grasped where it was taking me. Wonderful story line.
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Thanks so much, Violet
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Chilling echoes of bible translations smuggled inside rolled canvases and the punishment meted out to those involved, particularly Tyndale. Vivid and disturbing.
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Thanks so much, JIlly. I like what you saw in this
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saving knowledge – precious!
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Not to mention land titles
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Someone is doing his job really seriously.
Those books are priceless & need safe-keeping.
Glad he is preserving them & not allowing them to fall into wrong hands or end up in the bonfire…
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Thanks, Anita
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Dear Neil,
Now that I see C.E. has mentioned it. This has a Fahrenheit 451 feel to it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for reading, Rochelle
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Fascinating tale. I also get the Fahrenheit 451 feel. Good thinking on the librarians part to hide the astronomical and verse but also the land inventory.
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Thanks so much, Kelly
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You never know when a land inventory is going to come in useful again. I like a man who errs on the side of caution in desperate times. And this is undoubtedly a desperate time. Good one.
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A land inventory would be very useful to the invaders. Thanks, Sandra
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I was thinking of later, much later when the invaders have been despatched.
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Whilst others were reminded of Fahrenheit 451, I immediately visualised the bonfire scene from The Book Theif. A wonderfully atmospheric piece Neil
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Thanks so much, Keith
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I remember reading that the scrolls of the Library of Alexandria were used to kindle the Roman baths. Of course, there’s Bradbury’s work, and Orwell and Huxley. True and awful scenarios, but none of them foresaw cause we’re seeing now: the inability to focus long enough for reading. Well done.
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Thanks for focussing for a couple of minutes
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I’ll join him!
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He asked me to thank you. He worried it might be a lonely task
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What a gloriously sardonic title for the invaders – The Pure! I love your librarian as action hero, saving what he can before the brutish and ignorant take over. Haven’t we met him before in another of your stories? He is a true hero, doing what he can, heedless of the consequences, to preserve what’s worth preserving. I fear he’ll pay a very high price.
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Thanks, Penny, especially for noticing “the Pure”. No I don’t believe I’ve written about a librarian before, but I did write one about a monk in a scriptorium. And yes, he’ll likely be crucified
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As Penny says, this is a hero of the best sort. One never knows just what could happen should those land inventories end up in the wrong hands.
This was a great read.
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Thanks so much, Dale
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I hope he finds a solution in one of the old books. I figure that’s all he has got. Is it?
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Only time will tell
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I hope he can remember where he hid the land inventory, if not I claim title to all the gold mines.
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Sorry, no gold mines there. But there is nice salt flat if that’s any use
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Echoes of Alexandria, and many other times from history. Well done!
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And sadly, probably, many more to come
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I love your librarian, we might all have to hide books one day… our stories had a lot in common.
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Thanks, Bjorn. Yes they did
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I could really picture this, the scurrying. Nice!
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Thanks so much, Giselle
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Everyman for himself I guess, I like the lowly possibly lonely librarian looking for an exit and to survive. Chilling stuff all too real.
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Thanks so much. This story has been repeated many times over the last several thousand years
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I know its awful
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That’s my kind of heretic.
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Mine too
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Hiding books would be a declaration of defeat. This can never happen. Good thoughtful story!
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Not hiding books, on the other hand, has often been an invitation to a bonfire
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Nice! Made me if you’d tapped into a mindset similar to Rachel Caine in her “The Great Library” series. 🙂 Na’ama (who can’t help wonder if he’ll secret away tax-code next)
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Thanks, I’m afraid I don’t know the series
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I’ve only read the first book in the series a few months ago–got it from the library–it was engaging. I’ve enjoyed your little foray into ‘possible realities’ too!
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Fitting that the protector of cumulative human knowledge and wisdom is the protector of the city too, in a manner.
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In his own small way
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Will the invaders find time to read books? They will be busy plundering and capturing territories.
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I think he’s more worrried that they’ll burrn them
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Nice! I hope no-one desperate to ingratiate themselves with the invaders witnesses his activities.
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That’s always a possibility, I’m afraid
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Oh I feel his despiration. He needs to hide it all… burning books sickens me. You really painted a picture here. I can hear his panting breaths as he runs
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Thanks, Laurie
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A powerful story, with so many resonances from our present world. Thank goodness for the librarian, and for the power of books and ideas.
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Thanks so much.
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I like his presence of mind and his preparation in anticipation of the worst
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Thanks so much
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They always burn books, don’t they? He lives in horrible times but has kept his wit. I love it, especially the last line.
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Glad that he is the custodian of books and he is doing future generations a favor. Admire his sincerity.
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Thanks for keeping reading alive
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Wonderful job painting the picture of desperation and hope while awaiting the storm. Librarians make excellent heroes, I always think: they preserve so much that is vitally important.
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Thanks so much, Joy
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Terrifying. The Pure will root out their idea of heresy and destroy it. Good for the Librarian. I enjoyed the pace of this piece very much!
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Thanks so much, Brenda
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Loved the different take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much
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Cool story.
Ronda
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Thanks, Ronda
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Love the line “The librarian isn’t sure whether astronomical texts, and studies of verse are heretical. But he suspects they may be.”
The purity of the librarian’s motives is evident. All knowledge in book form deserves saving.
My favorite forbidden book is the one in Orwell’s 1984. It is the only one the hero is able to find, as I recall, in a land as replete with screens as our own.
I look foward to the invitation–not to the bonfire, but to read the rest of the book. 😊
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Thanks so much, andy.
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Makes me wonder which era of history —-or future history——-you’re writing about, because it’s all happened before, and it will happen again.
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All of them
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Reminds me of the Connery line in The Last Crusade. “Perhaps you should try reading books instead of burning them.” Or something close to that, it’s been a few years. Good read!
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Thanks, Russell
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I’m reminded of Fahrenheit 451
Well done, Neil. Let’s hope he can preserve those books for a future generation.
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Thanks so much, Russell
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I like this and think that from every fire that threats out past there is a resurrection of culture.
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Thanks so much, James
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Apologies for my bad writing: This should read – “from every fire that threatens our past’,
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Powerful description, Neil! I could actually see the librarian moving books in the dark.
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Thanks so much, Anshu
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Books and fire, an evocative combination. 🙂
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Thanks, Kristian
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The keeper of the words and dedicated to it. I like this Neil. It’s sinister and has – an I want to know
who’s going to find them and when – feel. Interesting interpretation of the photo prompt.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks so much, Isadora
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The imagery in this is great. It’s actually a great opening for a book. A fine job.
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Thanks so much, Lisa.
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A powerful story. I love your librarian hero. We need more like him – knowing what’s worth saving from the forces of ignorance and banality – and doing something about it.
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of course, he doesn’t think of himself as a hero. Just curating under unusual circumstances
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it happened that way in many places
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Yes it did
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A Bonfire of the Vanities, eh? I hope your MC can escape with his treasures. Lovely, evocative writing, Neil
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Thanks so much, Lynn
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My pleasure
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I like the understated bravery of the librarian. How apt that The Pure will be using fire to purify the city. I can hear them calling beyond the walls… terrifying!
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Thanks so much, Magarisa.
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Excellent, Neil. Great economy and use of words. Librarians are the keepers of protectors of truth and knowledge. I wonder why Marvel hasn’t given one a cape yet? would love to see this as something longer.
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Thanks so much, Sascha. I love your idea of the masked archivist
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🙂
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