My window is my television on the world. Drama, comedy—it has them all. Cheery Emma, resolutely walking the dog that’s her final fraying thread of love. Mr. Michaelson sneaking into the neighbours’ house once her husband has left for work. And my favourite—the Sadie and Dan show, which even has volume. Night before last, he came home drunk, and she’d locked him out. Great Heavens, what a banging and wailing and pleading there was! She opened the upstairs window, shouted, and emptied something over him.
When the thrill of viewing palls, I may turn to poison pen letters.
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Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here
What a firework you ignite at the close, Neil! Passive viewer turns thoroughly sinister. And “cheery Emma” with her “final fraying thread of love”. Achingly poignant. 100 words and not one wasted.
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Thanks so much, Jilly
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Dramatic and yet sad, but left me with a smile. A great use of this weeks prompt
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Thanks so much, Michael
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Dear Neil,
Your MC lives in an interesting neighborhood.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Just everyday folks.
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Talk about the fourth wall! Excellent, Neil.
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Thanks so much
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Ah neighbours… the tapestry of our lives, when all else fails.
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And a nice little earner too, if you’ve a mind for blackmail.
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Some places have more interesting neighbours than others!
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Ah! But do you know what goes on behind your neighbours’ curtains?
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Just sayin’ that your MC has a better view than I do!! 😉
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Nothing beats a good bit of people watching voyeurism. They sound like an entertaining couple!
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Watching the watchers
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Since I retired, I’m the neighborhood watch-woman. Only occasionally do I see something I question, like four young men sitting on the hood of their car smoking cigarettes and laughing in our neighbor’s driveway. Say what? I still haven’t thought about poison pen letters, but there’s still time.
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You already have the writing skills
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Interesting how you escalate the need for TV drama to develop into real life. No doubt he will become an excitable digital troll once he gets hold of a second hand laptop.
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Thanks so much, James
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You’d be good at writing them!
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I hope that’s a compliment
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What a view! Well done.
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Thanks so much
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Love that you used the TV as a prompt for a window and looking in on the neighbours lives. Honestly the things you see some days.
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Thanks so much, Laurie
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Talk about drama! So much story here, in so few words!
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Thanks so much, Linda
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it looks like an interesting neighborhood to live in. thanks for sharing. :)
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It may well become a fertile stomping ground for murder mystery writers
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Wonderful descriptions of the passing parade of neighbours. And great ending, where the narrator shows a little more of his true colours.
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Thanks so much, Margaret
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Neighbor watching certainly is a fascinating pastime. Very effective! Great final twist.
Angela
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Thanks so much, Angela
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It makes my neighbourhood sound very tame!
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Don’t you believe it!
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Neil, you’ve drawn quite a character there. You could build a world around this person.
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Yeah, but not a world I care to bring into being
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Good point.
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That sounds like quite a neighborhood – filled with mystery and intrigue. A lot seems to be going on behind closed windows and outside, too! Great narrative, Neil.
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Thanks so much
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A new twist on the “neighborhood watch” concept. At least it is not more AI.
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All hand-crafted
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She might do best to just be an observer, these folks seem a little sketch.
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You think they may come for her
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Ahhh, maybe. I didn’t think of that. Probably time to move on.
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Love it. Hope read more about them. There’s not much more fun than dysfunctional neighbours (other people’s’).
I believe poison pen letters are more effective if you use green ink. Just saying.
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I hear you
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Ooh, the poison letters should make for a lot of fun viewing. Here’s hoping he doesn’t witness a murder before he gets around to business!
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He may well witness one first hand after he gets started
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Wow, sounds like an interesting neighbourhood! Great take on the prompt!
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Thanks so much, Fleur
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You are welcome 😊
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